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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Pip's anatomy ratio is off, but I think that's also a part of your style so that's not a problem. His anatomy is rough, but that's something that will develop much more as you draw more. I do recommend drawing people from life. Then again, I suggest that to everyone. I would suggest it to DaVinci if he hadn't already.
Pip's hair shadow seems to have some purply tones to it, and I really like that a lot. I lot of people just resort to using the dodge brush for painting, and you can tell. The values all around could use a bit more dark parts, especially in the clothes, but the hair is awesome.
With the card pathways, the top one looks great. The one Pip is riding gets sketchy only towards the center of the swirl. The cards themselves look fabulous, and you should definitely be proud of them.
All in all my biggest critiques are what I've been telling myself. Anatomy and value. Your idea is creative, you skill very apparent, and your use of text is really nice looking, too. Very well done for sure! This is the type of image that will make me want to come back next year and see where you've developed.
I'm looking forward to it~ XD
This cover looks really nice, Ale!
I am excited to see what comes next. >:3
I hope you are ready for prologue antics then :U